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September 26, 2009 / theoldsilly

A Saturday Pontification – We ARE our Brothers’ and Sisters’ Keepers

Today I have for y’all more than just a line or two in short pontification format. It is a parable written by Ebrahim Rashid, that lends special meaning to the poignant pontification that we are, indeed, our brother’s keeper. Enjoy, reflect, and please share your impressions and thoughts in the comments.

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A mouse looked through the crack in the wall to see the farmer anmousetrapd his wife open a package. What food might this contain?’ The mouse wondered . He was devastated to discover it was a mousetrap.

Retreating to the farmyard, the mouse proclaimed the warning:

There is a mousetrap in the house! There is a mousetrap in the house!’

chickenThe chicken clucked and scratched, raised its head and said, ‘Mr. Mouse, I can tell this is a grave concern to you, but it is of no consequence to me. I cannot be bothered by it.’

 

 

The mouse turned to the pig and told him, ’There is a mousetrap in the house! There is a mousetrap in the house!’

pigThe pig sympathized, but said, I am so very sorry, Mr. Mouse, but there is nothing I can do about it but pray. Be assured you are in my prayers.’

 

 

The mouse turned to the cow and said ‘There is a mousetrap in the house! There is a mousetrap in the house!’ 

The cow said, ‘Wow, Mr. Mouse. I’m sorry for you, but it’s no skin off my nose.’ cow

So, the mouse returned to the house, head down and dejected, to face the farmer’s mousetrap . . . alone.

That very night a sound was heard throughout the house — like the sound of a mousetrap catching its prey.snake

The farmer’s wife rushed to see what was caught.   In the darkness, she did not see it was a venomous snake whose tail was caught by the trap. The snake bit the farmer’s wife.

The farmer rushed her to the hospital, and she returned home with a fever.

Everyone knows you treat a fever with fresh chicken soup, so the farmer took his hatchet to the farmyard for the soup’s main ingredient.

But his wife’s sickness continued, so friends and neighbors came to sit with her around the clock.

To feed them, the farmer butchered the  pig.

 The farmer’s wife did not get well; she died.  

So many people came for her funeral, the farmer had the cow slaughtered to provide enough meat for all of them.

The mouse looked upon it all from his crack in the wall with great sadness.

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Morale (thus sayeth the Old Silly): The next time you hear someone is facing a problem and think it doesn’t concern you, remember —-when one of us is threatened, we are all at risk. We are all linked, all interconnected, with invisible karmic thread.

All of us are all involved in this journey called life. We must keep an eye out for one another and make an extra effort to protect, encourage, and look out for one another.

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Oh and fore ya go – a little levity – my blogger buddy The Quirky Loon has a competition goin’ down. She’s gifting a “Plants vs. Zombies” game and bestowing a “Quombie Award” to the blog-hopper who can best pen a poem inspired by zombies. Ya have to link to her blog (which I just did – twice) and post your poem. Ya wanna here it? Here it goes-

A Zombie once wanted a Quombie.
He’d die in his coffin one to get.
He puzzled his head,
Though he was mostly brain dead,
and penned this pathetic poem wannabe.

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Okay toodles, chow and bye bye. Blog in tomorrow for a great interview with Boomer Generation novelist Elisabeth Lee.

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  1. John Standish / Sep 25 2009 11:42 pm

    Out Zormbie-standish! I vote YEAH! Bring on the Quombie award! ;)

  2. John Standish / Sep 25 2009 11:43 pm

    Oh and also – the parable? Right on, bro – we ARE each other’s keeper.

  3. Stanley Berber / Sep 26 2009 7:03 am

    Great moral to this story. Love the saturday ponts, Marv – and hey – zombie poem? pretty cool, lol.

  4. Cactus Annie / Sep 26 2009 7:22 am

    This story is soooooo true!. And I’ve been to Quirky Loon’s blog before – she’s even loonier than the old silly! lol

  5. Elizabeth Spann Craig / Sep 26 2009 8:25 am

    I love the parable…it didn’t go the direction I thought it would! I thought the mouse was going to get trapped and then taken in by the family as a treasured pet. :) I haven’t been to Quirky Loon’s site before now, but I just became a follower. Thanks for the tip!

    Elizabeth
    Mystery Writing is Murder

    • theoldsilly / Sep 26 2009 8:26 am

      Thanks, Elizabeth, and you’re welcome – Quirky’s blog is a daily stitch and a half – you’ll LOVE it! ;)

  6. Helen Ginger / Sep 26 2009 8:30 am

    Good parable. Love stories with a moral.

    Hope you win the contest. Your poem was very good!

    Helen
    Straight From Hel

    • theoldsilly / Sep 26 2009 8:35 am

      Really? Thanks, Helen – I don’t think of myself as much of a poet, but zombies inspre me I guess – lol ;)

  7. yvonne lewis / Sep 26 2009 9:36 am

    Thanks Marvin for writing this, I have a great fear at the moment……..Cancer. my cervix smear is abnormal, two of my children have been really supportive
    the other one don’t even want to know the detrails, I am heartbroken but not defeated.
    Have a lovely week-end.

    Yvonne.

    • theoldsilly / Sep 26 2009 1:41 pm

      Yvonne – my heart and prayers are with you. Like Ron and others have said here – think and BE positive. Positive energy, thought, and prayer are powerful forces. And always live each day as if it were your last – even when completely healthy it is the way to live life to its fullest. Take care and please keep us informed of how you’re doing – you have friends here.

    • quirkyloon / Sep 26 2009 5:25 pm

      I hope you don’t mind Yvonne, but I’m a cancer survivor! Breast and cervical! Cancer does suck, but you will be able to fight it! And it won’t be super scary after awhile! It is NOT always a death sentence. I promise. I know lots of women who beat this thing! And you can too! Honest!

      But I do know how overwhelming the feelings are right now. Just feel what you feel and find ways to self-soothe. My faith in God helped me tremendously.

      My prayers will be with you!

  8. Ron Berry / Sep 26 2009 9:53 am

    Yvonne, think positive. It might have just been a smudge on the lens of the microscope. As for the parable, I’ve heard it before but I”ve always lived that way. I help others when I can.

  9. katrina / Sep 26 2009 12:22 pm

    Yvonne, you are now and forever more in my prayers. Remember, we never take God by surprise.

    Great parable Marv… so fitting right now.

    Love you man!

    • theoldsilly / Sep 26 2009 1:42 pm

      Katrina – I’m pretty sure I know why you’re saying that. (wink) Take care, sweetie!

  10. Elspeth Antonelli / Sep 26 2009 12:57 pm

    A mouse story with a moral and a zombie poem. Perfect!

    Elspeth

  11. ReformingGeek / Sep 26 2009 1:43 pm

    I love the story. It is so true. It’s one thing to avoid the drama of someone’s problem but completely disengaging just isn’t right.

    BTW, I wrote a poem, too. I just posted it so you can head back there when you get a chance.

  12. Morgan Mandel / Sep 26 2009 2:24 pm

    That was a great example to not bury our heads in the sand. The rewards are so much greater when you help other people out than when you ignore them.

    Morgan Mandel
    http://morganmandel.blogspot.com
    http://www.morganmandel.com

  13. quirkyloon / Sep 26 2009 5:27 pm

    Great parable and poem Marvin!

    I really liked the parable it made me smile.

    The poem was great! But…will it be Quombie worthy? We shall see, my friend, we shall see!

    hee hee

    • theoldsilly / Sep 26 2009 6:05 pm

      Thanks, Quirky. And I also want to thank you for the kind and encouraging words for Yvonne. Lotsa good peeps here pulling for her – I hope she comes back and reads these comments – especially yours. You’re the best, gf. :)

  14. yvonne lewis / Sep 26 2009 6:01 pm

    To all of you who have sent me good wishes through Marvins comment I thank you, It’s most comforting to know there are many people
    the other side of the world have taken the trouble to write.

    My positivity was shaken for a while Thursday and Friday but today is a different ball game all together, I am a firm believer in prayer
    It helped when my son had cancer 2 years ago he is now in remission.
    Once again many thanks from the bottom of my heart.

    Yvonne.

    • theoldsilly / Sep 26 2009 6:07 pm

      Yvonne I’m so glad you came back to read these comments. Please keep us posted – and yes – ATTITUDE! Fight time, and fight to win. Having God on your side through prayer is a mighty sword. Wield it!

  15. CatLadyLarew / Sep 26 2009 7:35 pm

    OldSilly,

    Great parable… what one of us does effects all of us in some way or another.
    I also just posted my Quirky Zombie poem.

    To Yvonne: I’ll be healing thoughts your way!

  16. QM / Sep 27 2009 3:49 am

    A really good moral learned from there, Old Silly(:

    Hey, nice hearing from you again in blogger! Keep in touch

  17. Libby Walkup / Sep 27 2009 4:15 am

    Absolutely love the name of your blog, though very little time now, I will be back for more. :) Have a great day.

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